参考答案：[范文与点评]
College English Teaching in
China
In China．it is not a surprise to find a
college student who cannot properly communicate with foreigners or translate
between languages．Let alone write in English．So some people judge that English
teaching at colleges is a total failure. If that is the case, where do the
problems lie in
First of all, English teaching at college
is．to a great extent, teacher-centered. It is still very common in the classroom
that the teacher explains every language point in detail. while students take
notes all the time. Secondly, culture is neglected in English teaching．Students
are busy memorizing a large vocabulary as Well as a lot of English rules, yet
few students know how, when and where to use them. Finally overemphasis on the
test misleads college English teaching in China．For the sake of test results.
teachers teach to the test and students learn to pass examinations, leaving
behind student’s actual language competence．
In conclusion,
china college English teaching is to be reformed. Students should be centered,
culture should be introduced in language teaching, and examination should be
dealt with appropriately.
[审题]
根据所给的标题和提纲，可以确定作文主题是：改革中国大学英语教学的现状。写作的重点显然是指出要加以改进的方面。文体应为议论文或说明文。
[思路]
短文第一段可用例证法提出要讨论或阐述的问题，中国大学英语教学不成功的表现或标志，比如从听说读写的方面举例。第二段可用列举法和例证法详述失败的原因扩展段落．比如以教师为中心、忽视能力的培养和语言的运用以及过分强调考试等；并且注意运用相关的连接词“First
of
all…Secondly…Finally”等。第三段可用列举法总结全文提出自己改革的建议，中国大学英语教学应具体从哪些方面加以改革，比如以学生为中心、注意对文化的介绍以及正确对待考试等。
